For the figure drawing critique, I got a lot of feedback. They were that my proportions are off in Matt's forearms, hands, and elbow. Also, that I needed to shift him to the right so the eye flows into space instead of off the paper and to use more varigated lines.
To fix this, I darkened the lines to make them more varigated. I also drew the background behind Matt to fill up the empty sspac
To fix this, I darkened the lines to make them more varigated. I also drew the background behind Matt to fill up the empty sspac